Buenos Del Mar

Most of the following were written on an overnight flight from Santiago to Toronto on March 9, 2020 after a month-long trip through Argentina and Chile which began in Buenos Aires and ended in Viña Del Mar.

Preface by the Author
The request was odd
Yes, almost unthinkable
Fernet sin coca?
A straw-colored thorn
Tiny, light as a feather
A big flat tire
Improbable, yes
But provided enough time
Inevitable
Pull the culprit thorn
Push the bike another mile
pluck out several more
The tallest mountain 
Is a big mountain atop
Other big mountains
All pastel colors
All possible contours
Crumpled together
Disappointed that 
I didn't see a condor
I saw the mountain
A familiar sound
Absent, only imagined
Heard, yes, but not felt
The cubes of white cheese
The glossy salami rounds
The mound of olives
The wine keeps flowing
I hack at a giant steak
Flushed, with bruised fingers
Pissing up a wall
Alongside a busy street
An eternity
Knowing that I can't
I'm trying to roll my "r's"
Just to make her laugh
A difference between 
Being shy and curious
I wondered is all
While away the time
Doing whatever you would
But on foreign soil
Indeed it appears
I came halfway round the world
Just to have a drink
A bottle of wine
A huge plate of cold seafood
We finished the wine
I ate a hot dog
With just ketchup and mustard
That's what i wanted
Why a sleek black cat
Sleeps only on the two cars
Peppered with bird poop
Meandering routes
Each day a different odd shape
Squiggles on a page
Simple adherence
Would have me think there's one road
I see other roads
Dog shit on the street
Either strays or negligence
Well, i stepped in it
Posh outdoor seating 
We are ever so politely
Refusing beggars
A tank top tan line
A sandal strap tan line too
Naked but not nude
Three beautiful homes
No definitive favorite
Three beautiful homes
Same thing, different price
Same price, different thing, only…
I set the value
Collecting memories
Any odd thing, whatever
Can't help it really
The story I tell
The story told about me
The tree no one hears
Some things forgotten
Some missed opportunities
What did you expect?
A big bland sandwich
Impossible to pick up
Becomes a salad
The minimalist
Tours a maximalist home
And wants to live there
The maximalist
Encounters simplicity
And thinks he's simple
Entering my room
I see my true colors shown
Good enough alone
A journey finished
A homecoming beginning
An intermingling
Wake up in the morn
Not sure if l'm at home or
In Viña Del Mar

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  2 comments for “Buenos Del Mar

  1. waraexists's avatar
    waraexists
    September 25, 2025 at 10:07 pm

    fantastic memories and thought provocation.

    made me laugh also

    ”well, i stepped in it”

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  2. Penny Rainmaker's avatar
    September 26, 2025 at 8:58 am

    Love the mundane mixed with the deeper feels. In a world of trees no one hears…

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